Yesterday Room 17 went to the duck pond. The ducks were fizzy because they were swimming in coke and coke's fizzy. The water looked like magic sparkles. The grass felt icy cold in the shadows. The grass felt like slime.
By Jordan
Monday, April 14, 2014
Pick of the Bunch Writing Week 9 (oops, it's a bit late!!)
In Week 9 we went for a lovely walk down to the duck pond and then in to the bush. We are so lucky to have this wonderful place to explore just behind our school! Jordan's writing was voted the best.
Yesterday Room 17 went to the duck pond. The ducks were fizzy because they were swimming in coke and coke's fizzy. The water looked like magic sparkles. The grass felt icy cold in the shadows. The grass felt like slime.
By Jordan
Yesterday Room 17 went to the duck pond. The ducks were fizzy because they were swimming in coke and coke's fizzy. The water looked like magic sparkles. The grass felt icy cold in the shadows. The grass felt like slime.
By Jordan
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