Our 5 Sentence Challenge prompt this week was 'In the tunnel...' Eric and Josie were voted favourites by the class (you can only get voted for is you write 5 sentences! We had 11 out of 23 manage to write 5 sentences this week) and Joshua was picked for teachers choice.
Here's Eric's
I was screaming for my life. I was in my rusty, old mine cart zooming away from the giant boulder behind me. Sparks of light were flying out of my cart's squeaking wheels. I saw a light in the distance and I immediately knew all this horror would be over. Finally I was free of the creepy, haunted tunnel.
By Eric
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