Monday, September 15, 2014

5SC - Zack's Entry

The clouds were about to explode into rain. The bus was about to crash into a little dog. There was striking lightning in the dark, black sky. The birds were screeching in the air. The dog was staring at a man that was about to jump on his bike.

By Zack

1 comment:

  1. Some super sentences, Zack! You have described the picture really well. :-)
    Mrs Maclean, Team 5SC

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