Monday, September 15, 2014

5SC - Neive's Entry

The blue sky looked like it was going to explode with rain. The birds were floating in the sky. The village clock tower went tick tock. The kids were so excited to jump on the red and white bus. It's so relaxing sitting on this seat reading the newspaper.

By Neive

1 comment:

  1. Nice work Neive, you used a lot of descriptive language in your writing. From Maia W and Room 13

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