Pick of the Bunch Writing

Well it's been a while but we're back at it now - getting our Pick of the Bunch writing up on the blog! On Monday we went outside and blew bubbles. We used a Y chart to record what we saw, heard and felt when we were watching the bubbles, catching the bubbles and blowing the bubbles.  Our writing focus was to start our story from the moment Mrs B started blowing the bubbles (so we only included the important details) as well as using lots of describing words. Zachary was voted best writing this week.

The bubbles floated like balloons through the sky. I thought the bubbles felt soapy and watery. The beautiful bubbles were like floating see-through marbles. I popped watery, soapy bubbles. The bubbles popped high in the sky and near trees. I popped them with my pencil. I love bubbles.

By Zachary