Tuesday, May 27, 2014

The Cool Circus by Yuna

I saw an orange and yellow striped tent.  I marched into the tent. The juggling jesters were tossing balls up in the air. I got a pink, fluffy cotton candy and it was enormous! The great jugglers were cool.

By Yuna

2 comments:

  1. Your expression makes me feel in the same tent! I can imagine a full of very funny things in there. ^^

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  2. What a fantastic description of the circus, Yuna. You've included so much detail that I can imagine being there myself. I loved how you used alliteration - juggling jesters. Well done!
    Mrs Ower (Team 5SC)
    Costa del Sol, Spain

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