Tuesday, May 27, 2014

The Circus by Jake

I nearly fainted!! The circus was WICKED. Motorbikes, human chandeliers and more.  When we got to our seats, the spotlight blinded me. It was amazing.

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  1. AnonymousMay 28, 2014 at 9:48 AM

    Hi Jake,

    We love the way you hooked us in, with your first sentence. You have written 5 awesome sentences.

    From Rm4 at Tuakau Primary School

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