Whump! I smashed in to solid ground creating a shockwave of bark. I was at the playground on the twisty monkey bars and I'd just fallen off. I went to try again and whump! I decided I would have a break.
By Jake
Wednesday, March 12, 2014
Pick of the Bunch Writing Week 6
On Tuesday Room 17 went and played on the senior playground. Mrs B recorded our thoughts and feelings about it on the iPad using Poplet. Jake's writing was voted the best this week!
Whump! I smashed in to solid ground creating a shockwave of bark. I was at the playground on the twisty monkey bars and I'd just fallen off. I went to try again and whump! I decided I would have a break.
By Jake
Whump! I smashed in to solid ground creating a shockwave of bark. I was at the playground on the twisty monkey bars and I'd just fallen off. I went to try again and whump! I decided I would have a break.
By Jake
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We love your writing Jake! We hope you don't have too many bruises from falling off the twisty monkey bars. #from your buddies in room 20! #biggleslove
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