Each week we participate in a shared experience then write about it. Today we went for a wander through the nature trail and wow, did we find a lot of interesting things. Five students read their writing to the class and then we voted on our favourite. Congratulations Josie for your super writing!
I heard the crunchy rocks every time I stepped. Shivers crawled up my legs like a spider. My friends found cicada shells and ladybugs. I was as still as a statue because I spotted a wasp on a a leaf. My heart boomed in fear - I hate bugs! The wind whistled in my ear. My eyes twitched side to side. By Josie
Room 12 ~ We really like your writing, well done Josie!
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