It's been a while since we've shared our pick of the bunch writing. On Wednesday we went for a morning walk around the school to investigate what winter was bringing to the grounds. We found bare branches, frost covered flowers and very cold concrete!! Olivia's writing was voted the best this week.
On a cold, sunny morning Room 17 went for a walk. The poles were frozen like ice. Breath was coming out of my mouth. The chirping birds were flying around. The monkey bars were slippery. The grass was smooth. The grass looked like it had diamonds on it.
By Olivia
That sounds like great writing Olivia. Nice simile at the end of it. From Finn :-)
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